Editing & Revision

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“… present tense is not a reason I categorically reject a novel submission. But it often becomes a contributing reason, because successful present tense novel writing is much, much more difficult to execute than past tense novel writing. Most writers, no matter how good they are, are not quite up to the task.” Read on to learn some of what’s required to carry  it off.  [via Editorial Ass]

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Three drafts of the opening to John Updike’s novel “Rabbit at Rest.”

via New York Times

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“Vladimir Nabokov referred to editors as ‘pompous avuncular brutes.’ T.S. Eliot said that many of them were just “failed writers.” And Kingsley Amis, that laureate of cantankerousness, spoke of how the worst kind

prowls through your copy like an overzealous gardener with a pruning hook, on the watch for any phrase he senses you were rather pleased with, preferably one that also clinches your argument and if possible is essential to the general drift of the surrounding passage.

Raymond Carver, at least to begin with, was on altogether better terms with his editor, Gordon Lish, to whom he once wrote, ‘If I have any standing or reputation or credibility in the world, I owe it to you.’”

via The Two Raymond Carvers | The New York Review of Books

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here’s what happened.

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Grammar Nerd Corrective Label Pack

November 23, 2009

via   [Temple of Commerce]

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fighting bad grammar on the Internet

August 17, 2009

It’s a big job and someone is trying to do it.

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An editor’s work

July 20, 2009

Vanity Fair’s  red-pencil-wielding executive literary editor, Wayne Lawson, together with representatives from the research and copy departments, whip Sarah Palin’s resignation speech into publishable shape.[vanityfair.com]

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Poorly Written Promotional Copy Makes Me Sad

July 20, 2009

Here is a bit of advertising copy I came across on a local website today. Invites You For An Exclusive Peek At The City’s New Social Mecca. We Have Been Working Hard To Compile Some Crucial Elements And Stunning Visuals From The World Of Fashion And Nightlife So We Thought To Ourselves – What A [...]

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Poorly Written Documentation Makes My Head Hurt

July 20, 2009

I pride myself on being an autodidact when it comes to techie stuff, and I’ve done pretty well, especially considering I’m an analog age English major. But I do spend an inordinate amount of time banging my head against walls when I am trying to learn something,  not because I’m a slow learner, but because [...]

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focus on creating the absolutely strongest, most perfect manuscript you can

July 3, 2009

In her newsletter, agent Kristin Nelson shares a discussion she had with two other literary agents: “We agreed that for some of our projects, a year ago an editor would have bought the novel and then worked on some revisions with the author. This year, editors are passing and asking for the revisions first before [...]

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