This list is not complete, but here are elements I consider as I read and evaluate a nonfiction manuscript.
Clarity: Is the writing clear?
Concision: Do all elements move the work forward? Is the scope too broad or too narrow? Have you slashed out the weeds? Includes looking at: superfluous words; repetition; unconfident, qualifying words or statements; tangents or digressions; excess modifiers; idle, non-working words.
Unity: Are all elements at the paragraph, section, chapter, and book level centered on the primary topic? Includes: subject, scope, tone, style, point of view, tense.
“A good copyeditor can win over a resistant writer. Approaching him as we would an abused puppy, we try to build trust. We ask intelligent questions that express understanding and respect. We assure him that our work will be transparent and the editing negotiable. We emphasize collaboration.”
MAD about Words
is the brainchild (and heartchild) of
Mary Ann de Stefano
